Mouse in the Market

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I gave the apple one last satisfying crunch and then tossed the core away.

The market was busy this morning. Farmers in from out of town, hawkers striving to be heard above the noise of the crowds, anxious couplings of merchant and buyer as deals were haggled over and sealed, sailors on leave or looking for their next cargo, city folk wives and servants testing the fruit and meat for quality before taking it home for suppers, and of course the pickpockets.

Pickpockets in their natural habitat. Crowds and chaos and full coin purses and boxes.

As I watched I saw one young feller, only half again as tall as me, stumble into a plump lady, sending both of them and some wares flying. The skinny merchant with a large mole on his nose shouted about their clumsiness and threatened the law if they didn’t return the flagons to his stand immediately. While his back was turned, a second thief, female this time and a tad older, slipped in behind and took half of his morning’s earnings from his cash box.

She turned to slip away in the crowd and I caught her eye and winked. Had to give encouragement to the younger generation. She blinked at me, grinned and disappeared into the fracas.

Bored, I meandered up the street. Karnage and Sygmund weren’t likely to come looking for me for several hours yet and I had time to kill. Plus it had been ages since I had been in a town of any size at all and I wanted to check out the jewelry shops. The shops with the pretty gems, polished until they glowed and sparkled, displayed on the velvet like a feast set before royalty. My fingers itched to caress a deep red ruby, to cuddle a fiery emerald, to hug a shimmering opal.

After gathering a bit of information on the local jewelry establishments, I set off for Jeneer’s Gems. The locals seemed to think he had a large selection and I wanted to see me some sparklies.

The shop looked fairly new, the wooden sills and awning lightly worn from the weather, the stone still square from the quarry. I had heard about the big fire in this section of Kyrancet a couple seasons ago. The rebuilding was nearly finished. I was glad. Stealing from the fire ravaged folk of this town might of tweaked even my conscious but as they clearly were doing a booming business and fully recovered, they wouldn’t miss a little sparkly or two. Would they?

I stepped into the shop and my eyes were immediately drawn to the display cases. Curses! I wasn’t tall enough to see inside. Equal rites for gnomes will be instituted someday and counters, tables, chairs, everything would be built to accommodate our size. We were the superior race, the other races were too intellectually challenged to realize that yet. But it was coming.

“Shopkeeper?”

An aging man with a permanent squint to one eye, presumably the eye he used his loupe in, leaned over the counter and peered at me with watery grey eyes. “Yes, miss?”

“Do you perchance have a stool, good sir? One on which I could stand and gaze upon your fair merchandise?”

“We don’t allow gawkers here, miss. Move along.” He moved down the counter to where a couple, sappily in love, were looking at promise rings.

“Sir! I am here to buy.” I shook my coin purse meaningfully. “If I find something I like.”

The man took in my worn leathers, stringy brown hair, and tanned skin. His gaze lingered overly long on the two daggers at my belt, at least the two he could see. Finally he studied the coin purse in question and said, “All right.” He passed over a small step stool that was clearly used to reach the upper shelves behind him.

“Thank you, sir. I will let you return to your other customers. It may take me a while to make my decision.”

I stepped onto the stool and my attention was drawn to the large medium toned dark red ruby pendant displayed proudly in the center of the case. The cabachon cut and gold setting glowed in the light coming in from the window.

I had to have it.

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Best Served Cold

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I just finished reading Best Served Cold by Joe Abercrombie.

I was attracted by the blurb on the cover that mentioned a female mercenary who is left for dead and vows revenge on those who tried to kill her, and that the best killer in the world is sent to finish the job. Mercenaries out for revenge and assassins sounded right up my alley, so I checked the book out.

I have to say up front that I haven’t read any other books by Mr. Abercrombie and this was my first experience with his writing. I adored the level of detail and the characterisations in the book. Almost everyone could be classified as a rogue and I had no problem with that.

The pacing of the story was a little odd for me. It read more as episodic than as one continuous narrative. So there were a lot of ups and downs in the tension through the story. This made for natural places to put the book down for the night. I could get use to that type of pacing but it felt uncomfortable in places.

The ending was a little weird for me and I don’t want to give anything away so I won’t give details. I expected certain things of the story and was surprised often that events didn’t unfold in the way I anticipated or wanted. As I mentioned before I am a sucker for a happy ending and this ending was neither good nor bad. It just was.

I came away feeling like the author set out to make a statement about revenge. I definitely felt “cold” by the process in which revenge was sought and achieved.

The story made me think. I picked up the book for a fun, roguely read. I didn’t get that. I am still thinking about the book and probably will continue to for several more days.

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